I was a Year 6 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I was in Learning Space 1 and my teachers were Mr Ogilvie and Mr Wong
Friday, 23 June 2017
Character Web
LI: We were learning to choose a character from The giraffe the Pelly and Me and talk about
who the character was.
Narrative Check
Story organiser
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your story on the right. Start writing here! Enter your basic plot ideas on the left and write
Title
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Magical Island
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Orientation
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One day I was walking down the street when I saw a floating island. I took a closer look and on top of the island there was a little castle I decided to go in.
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Problem
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But I couldn’t get on the island. it was too high for me to reach. I noticed that it was going dark so I went home.
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Events
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The next morning I woke up I went back to the island I and saw a giant tree so I climbed it and got on the island. When I got to the island there were two guards. I hid behind the castle and got in from behind. I got in the castle and looked around there was lots of gold and jewels I heard footsteps. Someone was coming. It was the king. I hid in a closet. After a while the king left so I snucked out of the castle.
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Solution
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I went home and the next morning I went back to the island but it was gone and I never saw it ever again.
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Thursday, 22 June 2017
Setting description
LI: We were learning to make a description about a setting in The giraffe the Pelly and
Me.
Monday, 19 June 2017
Words that describe Monkey
LI: We were learning to write words that described the characters in the book.
Friday, 16 June 2017
Story Organiser
Story organiser
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Start writing here! Enter your basic plot ideas on the left and write your story on the right.
Title
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Baby bear
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Orientation
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One day Baby bear and Mama bear were in their cave going to get some fish for their lunch.
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Problem
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Baby bear wanted to jump off the cliff. he was really really really bored so he wanted to jump off the cliff. He distracted Mama bear by putting a fake fish down so she would get distracted
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Events
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When Baby bear distracted Mama bear he was ready to jump off the cliff.
Then baby bear jumped off the cliff then Mama bear saw Baby bear she was terrified, there was jagged ice around the mountain where Baby bear jumped. He fell on the jagged ice and went uncontested, Mama bear screamed at the ice after a few minutes Baby bear woke up.
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Solution
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Mama bear was happy and she grabbed some fish and they went home and ate their cooked fish.
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Baby bear
One day Baby bear and Mama bear were in their cave going to get some fish for their lunch.
Baby bear wanted to jump off the cliff. he was really really really bored so he wanted to jump off the cliff. He distracted Mama bear by putting a fake fish down so she would get distracted
When Baby bear distracted Mama bear he was ready to jump off the cliff.n the jagged ice and went uncontested, Mama bear screamed at the ice after a few minutes Baby bear woke up.
Mama bear was happy and she grabbed some fish and they went home and ate their cooked fish.
The giraffe the pelly and me
The Giraffe and the Pelly and Me – reading comprehension
1. What is The Grubber? The Grubber is the shop
2. What is the name of the boy in the story? Billy
3. Which three animals work for the Ladderless Window Cleaning Company? The giraffe the pelican and the monkey
4. Why is Billy afraid to climb into the pelican’s beak? He was scared that the pelican would eat him
5. How did the animals help the Duke? The giraffe the pelican and the monkey
6. Why did the Pelly not let the robber out of his beak? So the robber wouldn’t try to steal more grapes
7. The Duke helped the animals by offering them food. What food did he offer them? Grapes
8. Write two questions for a friend about the story.
9. Write three sentences to describe your favourite part of the story.
10. Draw a picture to illustrate the book below.
LI: We were learning to comprehension the story too find what was in the story
Wednesday, 14 June 2017
T Chart
LI: We were learning too make things that were a piece and a system we had to put
in a list.
Friday, 2 June 2017
Thursday, 1 June 2017
Using Adjectives
Looks- Personality-
White Bow tie Evil
Troublemaker
Fecale Looks- Crazy
Ink on his face
Pacman eyes
Horns
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Bendy is a dancing devil causes trouble around an abandoned workshop. Bendy is a cardboard cutout that is evil psycho and crazy.
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LI: I am learning too write adjectives.
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