Recount Planner

Title	Dancing
Reveal (orientation)	LS1 Went to perform in the hall on Wednesday and Thursday afternoon. Many of our parents came to watch us perform”. It was crowded with people. Many of our dances interested all the people that had turned up. “When are we next?” Ellanora asked. I said “We’re after room 3” Then We went on stage to perform.
Events	Our group's performance names were Gangnam Style, Single Ladies, Party Rock, Whip and Nae Nae, Dougie, And finally Harlem Shake. Our group was really funny we had to Shake our body like crazy people!.I enjoyed the performance it was fantastic everyone in our dance enjoyed it to.I was a bit nervous until people cheered us up.
Ending	I enjoyed the performance it was fantastic everyone in our dance enjoyed it to.I was a bit nervous until people cheered us up.

Recount draft

LS1 Went to perform in the hall on Wednesday and Thursday afternoon.

Many of our parents came to watch us perform”. It was crowded with people. Many of our dances interested all the people that had turned up.

“When are we next?” Ellenora asked. I said “We’re after room 3” And then we

Went on stage to perform.

Our group's performance names were Gangnam

Style, Single Ladies, Party Rock, Whip and Nae Nae, Dougie, And finally

Harlem Shake. Our group was really funny we had to shake our body like crazy people!  enjoyed the performance it was fantastic everyone in our dance enjoyed it to.I was a bit nervous until people cheered us up.

I enjoyed the performance it was fantastic everyone in our dance enjoyed it to.I was a bit nervous until people cheered us up.

LI: To write a "reveal" section for a recount.

To plan and write a recount in 40 minutes. Today for writing we wrote a recount

planner of Dancing through the decades. We needed punctuation like commas and full stops.